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Re: All Babies Are Blessings (8)
Time for a new review! Yay! -loves this story- pixie haircut, spiking out in all directions, it was black at the roots and purple at the ends I don't mind ...
Oct 21, 2008 -
Re: A painful first kiss
They're not original, I mean. The characters are lame, the storyline is horrible. But my point is that at least try to be original. Good luck, anyways. ;) -SELA
Oct 19, 2008 -
Re: A painful first kiss
I'd like to say it was original, but it really wasn't. It's pretty much the same Bella - Edward thing, except the names are changed, and the punctuation isn't right. ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Yes, What a Delightful Boy (1)
Wow. I feel like I just flew away on an LSD trip. -shiver- It - it was funny, and - well, cool isn't the right word. But - I don't ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Yes, What a Delightful Boy (1)
"The Passion of the PSHHHH-what?" My gosh, Nu. Problems much? Yes, yes. I like the characters, and all that jazz and I'm totally stoked for the second chapp, but you ...
Oct 13, 2008 -
Re: Oh, that irritable light!
Mae, you rock so hard it's creepy. I think Cher pretty much just laid it out, and really the only thing I saw was, well, my impression of the way ...
Oct 13, 2008 -
Re: Notes
Short. Anyhow, yes. This was, in the beginning, a swerve away from the happy little love stories. However, now it, too, has become cliche. Car crash? The guy's dead? Yeah, ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: All Babies Are Blessings (7)
I don't say this about a lot of stories, but this was great! The conflict, the characters (if a bit cliche) were well-done, and very vivid. It's refreshing to find ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Twilight Fan Fiction
Well, well, well. Another TwiFanfic. Now, I'm going to try and not be biased, because if there's one book I dislike above all else, or one author, it would be ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: Cupid's Arrow Chapter 1
I'm not one for nitpicking, so I won't, but... Like a ton of stories these days, this is ridiculously fast-paced. Everyone seems to be bi-polar, and none of them seem ...
Oct 8, 2008 -
Re: The 12 hour love story
Well, first off, this was really, really unrealistic. I mean, what kind of woman drives along the freeway looking for lonely hitchhikers, then when she finds one, practically forces them ...
Oct 5, 2008 -
Re: Blithe Bereavement -CH3 pt1
Procrastinator, I think you mean. "Ah, the winds of the May... or is it the tides of May? No, I think that was a song by Journey..." Yes, I just ...
Oct 2, 2008 -
Re: Indirect Biology
All reviews appreciated. I've wanted to do something like this for awhile - be as harsh as you want! ;) A quiet afternoon is one that, in its normality, can ...
Sep 22, 2008 -
Re: An end
Oh my, this was great! I was completely frozen, just staring at the screen. You made it so real! And it was amazing how they saved each other, and never ...
Sep 16, 2008 -
Re: Riddled Choices
Best to read 'Ancient Lies', too. This'll make more sense in the later chapters if you do. A fresh breeze tore through the quiet moment, rippling across the grass and ...
Sep 9, 2008
